First Draft Double Page Spread

This is my first draft of my double page spread. I have followed classic codes and conventions that my style model has also used, for example I have 3 columns of text, one main image related to the article, title and just the classic layout. On the other and I have missed some such as page numbers and a few more little features. I have put my artists name as the main title centred above him; this makes it clear the reader who the article is about. I have inserted a very important quote below him that basically sums up this article and is part of the rest of the quote at the top of my second page but I believe it's a nice touch to start on the first page. I have followed my house style of red, white and black shown in my main article, titles and nearly all text I have used.
Overall I am very happy with this as a first draft, even though I know there is room for improvement it's a very good foundation to start with.